by Cheryl W.
Member since:
December 10, 2005

Fire and Nectar

October 20, 2006 08:02 AM EDT
views: 44 | rating: 9.8/10 (13 votes) | comments: 13

Your lips on my lips,

a feeling so fine;

Fire and nectar,

truly sublime;

Teasing,

tasting,

incredibly sweet;

Passion unending

each time that we meet.

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Comments: 13

sheila ~the hapless housewife~ j. Oct 20, 2006, 8:04am EDT
Great poem!
Cat Givens Oct 20, 2006, 8:10am EDT
Ah, YES! could taste this one.
Shelly W. Oct 20, 2006, 8:35am EDT
Very nice, kiddo
Spencer T. Oct 20, 2006, 8:36am EDT
Smooch.
Lori White Oct 20, 2006, 11:32am EDT
Great poem, as usaul!
amanda wallin Oct 20, 2006, 11:34am EDT
I love the contrast of the heat of passion and the tenderness of romance melded into one sensual kiss. Ah, those were the days...now its just "fire and rain" :(
David Rochester Oct 20, 2006, 1:41pm EDT
Your sweet little love lilts make me all wistful.
John F Walter Oct 20, 2006, 3:58pm EDT
One of those poems that opens something inside me and probes around for the sensation and, yes! finds it, waiting to be loved. Thanks, Cheryl.
great poem thanks for sharing with us.
Laura M. Oct 20, 2006, 4:34pm EDT
I can take care of that as well, My Poet-. A Muse's work is never done, sighs! (laughing) I love this delicious kiss of a poem...but wonder, which comes first..the fire or the nectar?...Worth a future study, I think and I think we should volunteer, Cheryl!
Corina Carrasco Oct 20, 2006, 11:05pm EDT
This has a very nice pacing to it. Very sweet; very playful; very nice! Great job, once again!
Diane S. Oct 21, 2006, 6:14am EDT
I love the line fire and necter in this poem!
Jim Ross Oct 23, 2006, 3:27pm EDT
Cheryl, this is a wonderful read. The hot and sweet of it are very compelling.

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