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by Virginia M.

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August 31, 2006

Sleeping In

October 20, 2006 06:32 AM EDT

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Hard upon the ground,

Cold rain falls at break of dawn,

Mood is shattered now,

To achieve my daily chores,

Procrastination serves well.

Tags: rain, random musings, day, dawn, weather, sleep, cold, tanka, wake-up, good morning

To Groups: Night time rhymes, Tanka, Poetically Incorrect, originalpoetryaspirants, Poets and Writers, Poetic expressions, The Critics' Corner, Virtual Muse, poetryloverz, Word Painting, SHINE! Flash Writers!

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Connie C. Oct 20, 2006, 6:33am EDT

Cute. It is raining hard outside now, wind is blowing and plain misserable outside.

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Barbra L. Oct 20, 2006, 7:40am EDT

Very well said! My sentiment exactly, regarding our weather here.

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Susan A. Oct 20, 2006, 8:35am EDT

Is that Haiku? Lovely either way

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Virginia M. Oct 20, 2006, 10:19am EDT

Thanks for the comments:)....Susan, this is Tanka poetry

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