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Gather Grimlins at Play

October 17, 2006 08:20 AM EDT

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Points have disappeared,
As Gather grimlins stole them,
Will they be returned?
One can never be so sure,
But hope is left still intact.

Tags: grimlins, random musings, gather, stole, poetry, tanka, points

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Comments: 6

sheila ~the hapless housewife~ j. Oct 17, 2006, 8:22am EDT

LOL! You hit it right on the head!

Susan A. Oct 17, 2006, 8:26am EDT

Hmmmmmmmmm

graywyvern g. Oct 17, 2006, 1:47pm EDT

nice phrasing, an accomplished 57577.

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Anne B. Grote Oct 17, 2006, 5:12pm EDT

and don't worry about them. It's all inthe reading and writing!


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