by gautami tripathy
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May 2, 2006

Wonder

October 14, 2006 11:38 AM EDT
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Will you behold what I hold
or hold what I behold?

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Do I hold on to you little longer
or will it take longer to hold you?


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You holding me, beholding me
Or is it the other way round?

(c)gautami.tripatrhy
~May 23, 2006
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Comments: 10

Heather B. Oct 14, 2006, 1:14pm EDT
Gautami, thought-provoking and catchy! Very good :0)
Sandra L. Oct 14, 2006, 2:06pm EDT
Word-play! I like it.
Sonia M. Oct 14, 2006, 2:59pm EDT
Hmmmm.............very good. I like this play on words and their different meanings.....
Marsha B. Oct 14, 2006, 5:43pm EDT
Good one! Definitely thought provoking.
John L. Oct 14, 2006, 6:22pm EDT
very interesting.
Angie W. Oct 14, 2006, 7:24pm EDT
making me think! I love it!!
William M. Oct 15, 2006, 12:33am EDT
I like it, but making me think gives me a headache.
Harold Lorin Oct 15, 2006, 7:25am EDT
cleverly done
Carol Roach Oct 15, 2006, 9:45am EDT
very nice
gautami tripathy Oct 15, 2006, 11:07am EDT
Thanks! Isn't it wonderful that we can interprete differently by the interplay of same words?

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