by gautami tripathy

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May 2, 2006

Crashed!

October 12, 2006 05:17 AM EDT

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in frosty stillness
did you heed to critical crash
it was my heart

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Carol Roach Oct 12, 2006, 5:37am EDT

wow this is really powerful!

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Harold Lorin Oct 12, 2006, 7:24am EDT

Lovely, compact, upsetting

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Nic P. Oct 12, 2006, 9:08am EDT

Gracious, are those words packed with emotion.

Very VERY nice.
Thanks also for the connection request. Made my morning

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gautami tripathy Oct 12, 2006, 9:37am EDT

Thanks Carol....my muse is being kind.

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gautami tripathy Oct 12, 2006, 9:38am EDT

Heart break is always upsetting, Harold.

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gautami tripathy Oct 12, 2006, 9:39am EDT

Thanks Nicole...you are welcome. Your six word stories pack a punch too.

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Heather B. Oct 12, 2006, 11:39am EDT

Gautami...
moving and speaks volumes. When you get a chance,
read my piece called "Implosion"

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H. V. Shivadas Oct 12, 2006, 12:53pm EDT

An amazing few words... moving, hard-hitting, truthful... satyameva jayate

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ANAND (male) Oct 12, 2006, 4:56pm EDT

sorry no words to appriciate. i m speechless

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