by gautami tripathy

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May 2, 2006

Words

October 11, 2006 01:20 PM EDT

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words on paper
revelation of my
naked thoughts

(c)gautami.tripathy
~Nov 17, 2005

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Laurie White Oct 11, 2006, 1:27pm EDT

I like this, Gautami. It reminds me of my writing in my journal, naked thoughts I want no one else to see.

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~~ Sarina ~~ Oct 11, 2006, 1:33pm EDT

Perhaps that is why I backspace over most everything I "think" I will post.

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Tonia, who hugs trees G. Oct 11, 2006, 1:39pm EDT

Yes, this is very good, and very true. The push/pull of being a writer - how much of one self to reveal?

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Mary H. Oct 11, 2006, 1:42pm EDT

It is so freeing revealing those "naked thoughts".

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jamie b. Oct 11, 2006, 2:28pm EDT

ooooh that's on a line of eroticism.... at least... thats my initial reaction...

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John L. Oct 11, 2006, 3:26pm EDT

should this article be flagged for "nudity of thought" so as not to be offensive to any who keep their thoughts wrapped tightly.

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Barbra L. Oct 11, 2006, 5:37pm EDT

From Barbra L

I like this! Simple, direct and right to the point.

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Jay H. Oct 12, 2006, 12:49am EDT

well put

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gautami tripathy Oct 12, 2006, 9:45am EDT

Words are how we percieve them. For me when I write, I bare my soul. At times that's too frightening and I hit the delete button.

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Carol Roach Oct 12, 2006, 11:29am EDT

yes you really hit the nail on the head, naked thoughts.

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gautami tripathy Oct 13, 2006, 1:21pm EDT

Thanks Carol and Amy...words on paper are naked for us writers..

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