Dizzy
My heart
Spoke to my head
Too fast to understand
Everything I needed to hear
About you
Copyright 2006 Jim Ross
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Jim Ross
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July 9, 2006 Dizzy (Cinquain)
October 07, 2006 01:23 PM EDT
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Dizzy
My heart Spoke to my head Too fast to understand Everything I needed to hear About you
Copyright 2006 Jim Ross
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Comments: 20
It had an urgency to it... or maybe I didn't take my pills yet.
Seriously - I love it - your work is always a dizzy dance of excellence!
If there's a sentiment to be felt, Jacob, somebody's out there feeling it. You talk about checks and balances--nature gives us volume to balance things.
Sorry you had to take pills, Wolfie. ;-) Thank you for those kind words.
She DID make me feel that way, William. Thank you.
I agree, Moya.
Excellently put Jim.
Thank you, Terry!
I agree Pat! Thank you.
Thank you, Marianne!
Thank you, Shelbia!
Thank you, Jen!