Bombs Away
acorn
robbed of head
bullets to earth
Copyright 2006 Jim Ross
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July 9, 2006 Bombs Away (Wolfie)
October 06, 2006 02:39 PM EDT
(Updated: October 06, 2006 02:40 PM EDT)
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Bombs Away
acorn robbed of head bullets to earth
Copyright 2006 Jim Ross
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Comments: 17
Then I wrote that little ditty and realized what I had done - I had invented a form without real intention. LOL
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ME<--------- Completely innocent
Wolfie, see what you've done by creating "The Wolfie". Good job, and thank you. They're fun to write.
I'm with you, Brandea, they're worse than birds! Thank you.
I hear ya, d m., Wolfie has gone and done "The Wolfie"!
John, I'm still laughing at the score.
Thank you, Amy!
Thanks, Mark--acorns drop from the tree only to be picked up again by squirrels and stuffed in a hollow spot somewhere up the tree!
Of course, Leslie! Always! Thanks for your comment. :-)
Liked Amy, I really liked the play of metaphor here. What is the metaphor, the acorn or the bomb. When we live in an age where perpetual war on terror with yet to be defined "enemies" and "axes of evil" are in the offing by Machiavellian leaders, I think the acorn works to drop the bomb. But it isn't my poem, and on another level I credit you for the bivalency here.
Insightful thoughts, John, worthy of much consideration. Thank you.
'Ol swayback, eh. I love this little tandom tail dragger. Your response to the incident should net you with a Red Baron flying scarf, Liz--a strip of colored silk that can snap its pleasure in a high wind. You've got the spirit of flight and it shows with each passing "event." May your mags always give you the right answers and the tetrahedron point the way to softer landings than you describe.