Carousel

October 03, 2006 05:29 PM EDT

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Continuum of time,

Arranged in cycles,

Repeating,

Occassionally,

Until the Carnie,

Sends,

Everyone away at,

Last.

Tags: living, ringling, random musings, circus, family, carnie, time, words, life, poem, poetry, people

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Anne B. Grote Oct 3, 2006, 5:34pm EDT

nice description of the carousel.

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Tonia, who hugs trees G. Oct 3, 2006, 10:34pm EDT

Great acrostic poem - very nicely done.

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Carol Roach Oct 4, 2006, 3:34am EDT

wonderful

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amanda wallin Oct 4, 2006, 11:36am EDT

Nice and haunting.. A unique take on the finite cycle of life. this has a fun house, distorted, nightmarish quality to it as we're accustomed to seeing things in a linear way. Brilliant! BTW, thanks for your generous support and incredibly inspiring words.
Love,
Amanda

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