by Virginia M.

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August 31, 2006

Love With Monotone Rhythm

October 01, 2006 08:41 PM EDT

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The summer past,

the heat beguiled,

rapturous love,

and heart filled passion,

all to the tune of,

monotone rhythm,

of rain,

soft against hard,

and then gone,

as dandelions gone to seed,

upon the gentle breeze,

and with one last wish,

I said goodbye.

Tags: living, heat, nature, life, dandelions, poem, love, breeze, poetry, wish goodbye, rain, random musings, summer, people

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Comments: 4

Sherry Asbury Oct 1, 2006, 9:02pm EDT

Gorgeous write. This really touched my imagination. I see there are other poetry clubs than the tanka club I belong to, so will check them out. Thank you for the comment and the ideas.

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Tonia, who hugs trees G. Oct 1, 2006, 10:45pm EDT

Virginia - This carries the reader along beautifully, soft like a summer rain. Very nice.

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Carol Roach Oct 2, 2006, 7:11am EDT

lovely and melodic

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Elaine G. Oct 2, 2006, 8:56am EDT

Awww what a Bittersweet ending. This was a beautiful piece.

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