Zero Illusion (tanka)

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Jim Ross Sep 23, 2006, 12:51am EDT

Beautiful tanka, Manoj; wonderful perception of cosmic force and dilemma. I would be pleased if you would let me feature "Zero Illusion" at the Tanka Group.

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Leah Christensen Sep 23, 2006, 1:53am EDT

Beautiful!

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manoj sanyal Sep 23, 2006, 3:11am EDT

Thanks Jim... Thanks Leah for appreciations

Dear Jim ... It would be a great honor!

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Cindy Kelly Sep 23, 2006, 4:32am EDT

Wow. Pretty and philosophical. :)

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Shelly W. Sep 23, 2006, 8:58am EDT

very nice,tanka you!haha

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Martha Jette, Author/Editor Sep 23, 2006, 4:59pm EDT

Very well done, Manoj!

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manoj sanyal Sep 25, 2006, 12:07am EDT

Thanks Cindy, Shelly and Martha for likings and appreciations.

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Sherry Asbury Sep 29, 2006, 12:59pm EDT

Lovely. . . . a stream of cool water on a too-hot day. Very Zen flavor and flow is superb.

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manoj sanyal Sep 30, 2006, 8:34am EDT

Thanks Sherry for your encouraging words of appreciations.

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Alena B. Oct 6, 2006, 2:43am EDT

I love this Tanka!

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manoj sanyal Oct 6, 2006, 4:06am EDT

Thanks Alena for appreciation.

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HGM Moya Goatley Nov 16, 2006, 10:30am EST

Thought provoking. Interesting. Moya

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manoj sanyal Nov 16, 2006, 11:37am EST

Thanks Moya for appreciation.

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DragonSoul !. Apr 3, 2007, 11:24pm EDT

Quite beautiful, manoj. I may have to try a little tanka of my own one of these days. Well written, great flow, and vivid imagery.

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Dennis Gilman Jan 14, 2009, 9:32am EST

Very pithy. Lots of thought in such few words.

You took poetic license, so I won't attempt to correct the described shapes.

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Zero Illusion (tanka)

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