by Virginia M.

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August 31, 2006

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September 18, 2006 11:45 AM EDT

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I had no problem writing the poem, but I can't come up with an acceptable name. Any sugestions, please?

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Acorns falling down,

Natures' bounty for the squirrel,

Scampering through leaves,

Fallen from the mighty oak,

Trees, stark and barren, sleep.

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Comments: 4

Michelle W. Sep 18, 2006, 11:46am EDT

I like the title "Fall".

Sandy (back in Ohio...blah!) Sep 18, 2006, 11:55am EDT

So do I.

Cheri C. Sep 18, 2006, 12:11pm EDT

Mother nature. I like Michelle's as well.

Virginia M. Sep 19, 2006, 10:17am EDT

Thank you Michelle, Sandy and Cheri for your sugestions, but I decided to go with, "Beneath the Oak" :)


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