Tranquility (Lanturnes)

manoj,
I like very much your use of the concrete poetry form to structure this sublime piece that points to the relationship between a numinous shadow and a infinite human horizon in metaphorical terms of consciousness.

For me, this is not only a fine formulation of the human being's existence in the world through "feels" derived from the transcendent ground of the One, it is also a lovely optimistic trio of "lanterns" shedding light on our current condition, and, in a forward looking pre Simulationist fashion, animating all of us to move beyond despair and despondency to stimulated thought by seeking the meditation trance that sincere relationship with one's Higher Power brings: "Mesmerizing."
These recent metaphysical pieces of yours that also extend your own experimentation with different poetic forms, I find endlessly stirring and inspiring.

And your readers grow in consciousness and poetic insight through your personal striving to become a better poet and thinker.

The arrangement as a stele is elegant-it adds a
timeless and memorial quality.

H

Thanks John. Honestly, I write as I feel at that moment and I don't think too much. Very happy that the feels could be transmitted. Thanks dear.

Thanks Harold for appreciation.

Thanks Liz. Yes, you are right.

Have nice times

manoj

Manoj, thanks.

It's so difficult for me to think thoughts beneficial to others these days, let alone write them down.

I see only bright lights, black most of the time now.

Maybe later.

Feelings are still good tho.

Thanks again, and 'tis nice.

By the way I have always liked to see white spaces in poems, as it gives one pause to think.

I agree with John here. The line formation is particularly effective. The poem has the feel of a chant or prayer.

Dear Richard... Thanks!
Black is the combination of colours... so a bit blurred it seems. I am sure that you would very shortly see the original ingrediant colors.... cheers!

Thanks Nathan for appreciations.