Falling for Tomorrow
Autumn falls all 'round
In a storm of leaves and twigs
Nuts roll from the roof
That bat chairs and flower pots
And lodge in places to grow
Copyright 2006 Jim Ross
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July 9, 2006 Falling for Tomorrow (Tanka)
September 15, 2006 02:26 PM EDT
(Updated: September 15, 2006 02:55 PM EDT)
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Falling for Tomorrow
Autumn falls all 'round In a storm of leaves and twigs Nuts roll from the roof That bat chairs and flower pots And lodge in places to grow
Copyright 2006 Jim Ross
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Comments: 12
Perhaps it's the rhythm the acorns make as they pelt the house and outdoor furniture, Liz. I don't know, but the sounds are somehow friendly.
You're not missing anything, Mary, Amy pointed out the typo and I took care of it.
That subject is near and dear to me, Moya. It's literally the stuff of life.
I'm chuckling, Carol, at your mini-big bang phrase.
I agree, Juniper--it's fascinating.