by gautami tripathy
Member since:
May 2, 2006

Short verse......Hounding©

September 13, 2006 12:45 PM EDT
views: 25 | comments: 14

My silhouette and I,
close yet far away
hounding each other

©gautami.tripathy
~7 Sep 2006


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Comments: 14

Karuna G. Sep 13, 2006, 12:56pm EDT
Stunning!
What a wonderful poem and a beautiful metaphor!
Thank you so much!
Ludie Gee Sep 13, 2006, 1:08pm EDT
Terrific!!
Shaunee C. Sep 13, 2006, 2:05pm EDT
short but graet
gautami tripathy Sep 13, 2006, 2:29pm EDT
Short verses come easy for me!
Mary H. Sep 13, 2006, 2:41pm EDT
Beautiful Haiku!!
Richard Melendez Sep 13, 2006, 4:25pm EDT
gautami... an insightful and intriguing verse.
John L. Sep 13, 2006, 5:22pm EDT
tHE ULTIMATE STALKER.....cute...
Carol Roach Sep 13, 2006, 5:53pm EDT
your silhouette is hounding you, how scary, shadowing you protecting you emulating you is great but hounding you. yuck,

great poem gave you a 10 of course
John B. Sep 13, 2006, 9:25pm EDT
Nice construction, beauitful
gautami tripathy Sep 14, 2006, 10:11am EDT
Thanks Mary, Richards, John L, John B, Julie and Carol for reading it and the comments.
gautami tripathy Sep 14, 2006, 1:29pm EDT
Thanks Amy,

My shadow chases me even when I don't want it to.
Jim Ross Sep 20, 2006, 11:20pm EDT
I love truthful humor, Gautami, and you have a gem here. Good job.

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