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Short Verse...Detonated

September 12, 2006 02:11 PM EDT (Updated: September 12, 2006 02:20 PM EDT)

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total strangers
pulled by unknown force
passions detonate

(c)gautami.tripathy
~7Sep 2006

Lest I forget, I must post my short verses too. Those simply flow at times!

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Comments: 8

amanda wallin Sep 12, 2006, 3:03pm EDT

flow/indeed!Brilliant,succinct,and/lilting/comentary!

John L. Sep 12, 2006, 4:31pm EDT

ah,,,,,,LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT....THUMP-THUMP..THUMP-THUMP

gautami tripathy Sep 12, 2006, 11:04pm EDT

Thanks!

How I love writing short verses!

Carol Roach Sep 12, 2006, 11:22pm EDT

wow I would like to know what those passions were all about

gautami tripathy Sep 13, 2006, 2:22pm EDT

Someday Carol, I just might....

John B. Sep 13, 2006, 9:28pm EDT

Enjoyed

gautami tripathy Sep 14, 2006, 10:59am EDT

Thanks John, Amy


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