She is a lucky lady to have an artist of words to write about her as you do. There were many images here I loved. The sea is my favorite place in the world and you made your slight reference make me hear the waves.
"Gold, gloaming, glee" and "clap, cresting" work divinely well in this alliteration-driven tanka; 'gloaming' for me is one of the most beautiful words in the English language, for me. Another splendid offering, Jim.
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the gift of being with someone
reflecting your love of the sea
and your company
in the sparkle of her eye
Thank You.
Sure do, Stephen. I've been all over, but I keep bouncing back.
Sounds like you're ready to get gassed up and going, B.J.!
Thank you, everyone.