there existed a great nation that believed in justice for all men and women. Its leaders labored long and hard to see that every child received a decent education, had enough to eat, and learned how to be a productive member of society.
This nation spread its ideals throughout the globe, and had citizens in some of the most oppressed parts of the world speaking its messages to one another, and clamoring to be given the freedoms this nation represented.
This nation was at the forefront of medicine, and engineering, and showed the world what a balance between innovation and conservation might produce.
Sure, sometimes the ideals of this nation and their application didn't quite mesh, but many of its leaders tried to do the right thing.
But one day a usurper stepped into the highest office of the land, and stood by as a great evil was perpetrated against its people. Using that as an excuse, this usurper turned the might of the great nation against not only those who had aided in this great evil, but even innocent bystanders who just happened to look a lot like those who'd commited the crime.
He sent young men and women overseas, to occupy another country because he didn't like its leader, and thus brought about the death of tens of thousands of innocent people. Men, women, and children. At his command, thousands were thrown in prison, and many were tortured.
But the usurper wasn't happy with just doing these things. He decided that, since he had been given such a golden opportunity, he'd dismantle many of the things that made the nation respected throughout most of the world. He ordered his agents spy on his own people, and forced dissenters to hide from his eyes, and had his minions call them cowards and traitors for daring to disagree with him.
He gave tax breaks to those who stole jobs from the citizens of this nation, and made sure the richest among them would be able to grow richer, while those who had the least were made to go without. He fed his friends and allies the rarest delicacies, and declared that those who could not afford them were simply "too lazy."
He helped his minions steal the future from the children, and called it progress. He allowed his followers to rape the land and called it conservation. He allowed his allies to spew filth into the air, and called it 'fresh air.'
He took control of the press, not by force, but by deception and the application of wealth, and the press told the stories in such a slanted way that he appeared to be a hero rather than a villain. His minions, the wealthiest among this nation's people, bought up the press, and forced those who reported the news to lie and dissemble and spin the news to propogate myths and stereotypes.
He took the mantle of a "godly man," all the while spurning the teachings of the deity he claimed to represent.
And, under his leadership, the nation that had once been held in such high regard grew to be hated and feared, and the whole world trembled when he beheld them. He believed that because HE wanted it, or believed it, it was truth. He surrounded himself with yes men, and destroyed those who dared to point out his shortcomings.
But the people of this nation were not stupid. Despite all of the things he and his minions had done to prevent it, the people began to whisper among themselves, and slowly came to agree that this usuper was a fool, and his minions little more than icons of greed and hunger. The whisper became a rumble, and the rumble became a shout.
"No more!" the people cried, and they took up their pens and fought against the usurper. But while they were many, the usuper's minions, and those who were deceived by his cloak of righteousness, were also many.
And the battle was joined...
(to be continued)...
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Saje W.
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Comments: 33
If you do not mind, I am going to send it to many of my friends and family.
I am just stunned. This is SO good!
This group is part of a project to write a series of flash utopian fiction pieces around an imaginary federation of diverse villages each working out their methods of community life. I am visualizing little dramatic impacts that also impart information about how the people of the community involved solve their social problems.
A fictional project allows for social activist imaginings outside of the currently "possible" to promote ideas in an easily digestable and enjoyable form, each person involved adding their bits to the overall project. It would be wonderful eventually to publish these stories into an inspirational book, but I am mostly interested to see what kinds of ideas for possible social structures result. I am hoping eventually to see a whole world of ideas created through these short bursts of fiction, little vignettes or as one person suggested, peeks into open doors. There is no set format to fit. What each participant writes would be helping to create the structure itself.
A possible jumping off point would be to write stories based on the scenario:
We are a group of colonizers sent to a new planet, with a variety of skills and knowledge. The core group has been given the job of a sort of council of elders, to develop the new constitution, by-laws, societal structure within which the colony is to operate.
This is only a suggestion. The whole point is: there are no limits
Peace,
libramoon
Very well written.
"I suggest you send it to the media, whatever outlets you choose."
Somehow, I doubt that many would do anything with it, as many outlets are controlled by the usurpers' friends and minions.
Namaste
Peace and creative thinking,
libramoon
Though I do ask that due credit be given. :)
Seriously Saje, you hit on a brilliant way to sound the alarm without getting all caught up in the endless details we often get sidetracked by. Thank you.
This is well written, and I agree with your basic premise, and I also DO NOT like GWB. However, I think Americans are all too ready to pin decades of erosion of our national ideals on this one president, when in fact erosion happens a little bit at a time over many years -- witness the Grand Canyon.
Nor was I aware that either of these men launched a war against a sovereign nation JUST because they disliked its leader.
And, near as I can tell, FDR was elected to office FOUR times. The Usurper in question was placed in office the first time, and played every dirty trick in the book to make certain he made it there a second time.
I will, on the other hand, agree with your assessment about the slow erosion of things. However, it is pretty clear that this particular president doesn't have any qualms about taking it as far as he possibly can...what, with signing statements, and blatant disregard for international treaties and the Constitution.
Roughly 50% of the country never wanted him as President in the first place. And, not surprisingly, he has turned out to be just as bad as we imagined he would be.
Until 9/11 he gave terrorism very little attention at all, then used it as an excuse to attack Iraq, which he had every intention of attacking since before he came into office.
YOu are brilliant and this proves it. What a sad tale of truth. The usurper should be tried for war crimes by an international tribunal.......