by Alankrita P.
Member since:
May 8, 2006

Poem: Just this ©

August 28, 2006 04:27 PM EDT
views: 24 | comments: 13
A single word
Life changed
To something rare

A single glance
Eternity held
Spellbound forever.

A single kiss
Destiny ravelled
Tangled Fates
Entangled.

©Alankrita Pandey
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Comments: 13

Nancy S. Aug 28, 2006, 4:30pm EDT
Brief and to the point. I like it!
Vicky P. Aug 28, 2006, 6:12pm EDT
Very lovley
Martha Jette, Author/Editor Aug 28, 2006, 7:35pm EDT
Very succinct and well said.
Max Babi Aug 28, 2006, 9:57pm EDT
That's nice Alana, pithy and potent.
Welcome to minimalists club...

cheerz!
Carol Roach Aug 29, 2006, 12:54am EDT
I love it it didn't have to be a sylable longer, it was perfect.
George Corneliussen Aug 29, 2006, 9:48am EDT
Ain't love grand .
Alankrita P. Aug 29, 2006, 5:03pm EDT
love makes the universe go round...
Philly Murray Aug 30, 2006, 10:28am EDT
Totally awesome words, just hits ya where it hurts.
Ludie Gee Aug 31, 2006, 2:29pm EDT
Hello
;-)
x
Anthony F. Sep 1, 2006, 1:55pm EDT
Beautiful
Anthony F. Sep 1, 2006, 3:39pm EDT
Thanks for your comment on Trust - A spiritual View.
I am glad that it provided you with some insight and invite you to peruse some of my other writing. I enjoy reading your work and feel honoured to meet someone who takes the time to explore their experiences.
Thank you

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