(I almost forgot, but didn't. I knew this was half-dormant, in the back of my mind, the unaccessed parts of my memory's hard drive. Guess she deserves a day in the sun. This is unique in that I never write obviously "jewish" poems if for no other reason than spirituality isn't really like a shirt you should just put on or take off - but here she is anyway - she was originally a posted comment to a poem by a friend)
~w
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(kol echad tzarich la-avod et Hashem
mi-toch yirah u-mi-toch ahavah)
Bene ha-elohim,
that verse,
and light
flickered images
swept shadows
on cave's walls,
verse like
light gossamer
sounds, and purity,
so bright,
razing sholom bayit to the ground.
I, who was new to Yiddishkeit,
grappling up steep inclined words,
stumbled, fell, down hallways,
back alleys littered with bodies,
Strained to reach that,
reach up, that...
I could meet you on your road back
from your vision quest of the
Cherubim and Seraphim,
Filling all eternity—
Adonai Elohim,
you saw,
and tasted heaven in
those words.
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"Yiddishkeit" - Yiddish, meaning "Jewishness;" a word similar to Orthodoxy and Observance, but suggesting perhaps more an emotional attachment, and a feeling of identification with the Jewish People, than full commitment to a lifestyle based on observance of the "Mitzvot," the Commands of G-d, as recorded in the Torah.
"Kol echad tzarich la-avod et Hashem mi-toch yirah u-mi-toch ahavah," translates roughly as 'Everyone should serve Hashem out of fear and out of love' -- The Jewish wisdom equivalent of "carrot and the stick" so to speak. :-)


Comments: 17
This line was incredibly original and powerful for me- "grappling up steep inclined words".
I second Laura. "Grappling up steep inclined words" presents the reader with a stunning vision.
And it only makes sense--as surely as when one reads Baudelaire's Flowers of Evil, through the proud luciferian disobedience dependence in his alexandrine verses we intuit the greatest love and blocked worship of the divine--that Gather's most infamous and distinguished "bad boy", the sinner who hides sainthood so effectively we mistake whips for caresses and chains for massaging fingers, would be the only poet here who could write it.
Joseph Conrad was right on describing Kurtz in THE HEART OF DARKNESS: The great soul is capable of the greatest good and evil.
Meet Will Evans, the great writer en potencia who suggests he is a mere dandy, dilettante and poseur.
The Cretan liar who isn't from Crete.
The Angel who will say Kaddish over me if things go south.
The anti-Kurtz.
My funny Elohim.....
BITE ME AND GROW UP!
how do spell GOOSSSAMerrrrrrrrrr lolololol