As summer continues hot and mesquite scents the night . . .
Candlelight Dinner
Breeze fanned flame dances
For lovers beneath the moon
Who eat and drink night
© 2006 Jim Ross
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Jim Ross
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July 9, 2006 Candlelight Dinner (Haiku)
August 04, 2006 01:14 AM EDT
(Updated: August 04, 2006 01:14 AM EDT)
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As summer continues hot and mesquite scents the night . . . Candlelight Dinner Breeze fanned flame dances © 2006 Jim Ross
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Comments: 8
I like the preface of the hot mesquite scented night. Sets a mood without interupting the verse.
Oh these summer nights
I'll wait for that day.
God bless.
Since I’m in the middle of Finals week, I hate to admit, but I must give in to the temptation of leaving a generic comment
But to give it a little personal touch, I added some artwork for you to enjoy!
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