55 Words Story......
He looked with rapt attention at the cascading water down
her perfect body.Desire rise through him yet again.
Suddenly the love-filled night was not enough. The
serpent of yearning was soaring all too soon. Picking
her up, he went back to the bed. The dance of love began
as never before. Crescendo to Calm!!!!!!!
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rise maybe should be rose
This is wonderful, I love the line The serpent of yearning was soaring all to soon. Write more.
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Romantic Interlude
Touch me with your words
singing a sweet melody
from your heart
Hold me in an embrace of passion
keeping me close
from the start
Sharing the feeling of your love
smiling from the inside
daning slivers of light
illuminating the depth,s
of one,s own desires
Thunder of a shattering climax
soaked to the soul,by Shelly Wiseberg
Do I detect a bit of humour in there Gautami? Again, crescendo to calm, I think someone else said this is eloquent. Thanks.
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