by Cheryl W.

Member since:
December 10, 2005

Bliss (Haiku)

July 31, 2006 10:16 PM EDT

views: 20 | rating: 9.6/10 (8 votes) | comments: 8

you flutter along

my shoulder gives blissful rest

lovely butterfly

Tags: haiku, nature, poetry

To Groups: Poetically Incorrect, originalpoetryaspirants, haiku, Heat in the Kitchen, Poetic expressions, Poetry, Poets and Writers

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Comments: 8

Spencer T. Jul 31, 2006, 10:41pm EDT

Sweeeeeeeeeeet!

jessie voigts Jul 31, 2006, 10:42pm EDT

beautiful, cheryl.

Anne B. Grote Jul 31, 2006, 10:47pm EDT

airy, light, sweet, delicious! Anne Grote

Aileen F. Jul 31, 2006, 10:48pm EDT

Oh, how cool!

Laurie White Jul 31, 2006, 10:48pm EDT

This is a fun one, Cheryl!

Jim Ross Aug 1, 2006, 1:02am EDT

Cheryl--Tender is as tender does. A beautiful, delicate moment of joy. Really liked it.

John F Walter Aug 2, 2006, 4:28pm EDT

Really subtle and delicious.
Gave me a frisson of pleasure.


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