"Clap the backpack flap". Say it three times, chuckle, chuckle. Thanks Barbara. You know, we're always looking for ways to speed up or slow down readers in this writing craft; I never thought of using a tongue-twister before. Unfair?
Unfair? Not a bit! The staccato feel of the sharp rhyming conveys a sense of urgency, one's body saying, "Hurry up and give me the food rightthisverysecondorelse!" I like it.
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Since I’m in the middle of Finals week, I hate to admit, but I must give in to the temptation of leaving a generic comment
But to give it a little personal touch, I added some artwork for you to enjoy!
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