I was skimming a page of many works and your words jumped out at me as the most fascinating on the list. I was disappointed when there wasn't more. And that's the truth.
I like the sound of pomegranate lips. I can think of a line to throw in after that just for laughs...'whistle Dixie!' Really a good poem, Aileen. I like poetry when it speaks chapters in as few words as this.
I grokked this so much, I practiced dhawq (spiritual tasting Sufi style) reading it again and again as an exercise. Your delightful approach completely cleansed the negative meaning of "bite me" from that two word phrase, and rendered me, satiated on words. Citrus, vanilla, pomegranate, chocolate...sips of paradise on an exonerated man's lips.
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Comments: 36
Magi
Aileen serves dessert.
Cami, that's really kind!
Andi, it's that "parents don't have sex" thing, that's all
Good one!
pomegranate lips whistle Dixie - that is classic, Richard!
Citrus, vanilla, pomegranate, chocolate...sips of paradise on an exonerated man's lips.