by manoj sanyal
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May 5, 2006

Love ( Haiku & American haiku )

July 02, 2006 12:33 AM EDT (Updated: July 03, 2006 08:11 AM EDT)
views: 18 | rating: 10/10 (3 votes) | comments: 9

Love (American haiku)

 

All seek to become whole

Hums like nectar crazy bee

Fragrance always remains.

 

 

 

Love (haiku)

 

All seek to be whole

Hums like nectar crazy bee

Fragrance remains long.

 

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Comments: 9

John Doyle Jul 2, 2006, 12:55am EDT
Exactly
Manoj - enjoyable!

Magi
manoj sanyal Jul 3, 2006, 8:11am EDT
Thanks John, Thanks Magi.
Anne B. Grote Jul 3, 2006, 10:46pm EDT
I love these. Great thoughts! Anne B. Grote
manoj sanyal Jul 4, 2006, 12:31am EDT
Thanks Anne for appreciation.
Laurie White Jul 4, 2006, 12:39am EDT
I really liked this one Manoj and can almost smell the sweet fragrant flowers.
manoj sanyal Jul 4, 2006, 5:21am EDT
Thanks Laurie for appreciation.
Take care.
John F Walter Jul 5, 2006, 9:57pm EDT
I liked both variations, and the word 'crazy' strikes me as the key to both poems.
manoj sanyal Jul 6, 2006, 12:01am EDT
Thank you John for your words of appreciation.

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