Metaphor. A metaphor is a figure of speech in which a term or phrase is applied to something to which it is not literally applicable in order to suggest a resemblance (moonlight sleeping on a bank. And tear our pleasures with rough strife/Through the iron gates of life. Man is the shuttle, to whose winding quest/And passage through these looms/God has ordered motion, but ordained no rest). It may consist, as the examples show, of a single word or an elaborated idea. The virtue of metaphor is that it permits us to say a great deal in a few words. Furthermore it sets up in the mind of the reader or listener a creative process that makes him amplify the idea and come to feel tht it is his own and hence to accept it.
Metaphors do not suggest merely resemblances. They evoke concomitant images and often call up emotions that strengthen or enlarge upon the intended meaning. Thus when Macbeth says that he has supped full with horror, the very homeliness of the metaphor (to which many eighteenth century critics objected as being undignified, "unworthy" of poetry) heightens the effect; it is as if Macbeth had come to accept horror as his everyday food. And so when Hamlet, considering the effect of his "mousetrap" on his uncle's conscience, says:
If his occulted guilt
Do not itself unkennel in that one speech
It is a damned ghost that we have seen
And my imaginations are as foul
As Vulcan's stithy
he has employed two good metaphors. His uncle's guilt has been likened to a skulking dog and his own mind to a stithy or an anvil. The latter is particularly good because it suggests not only the dirt, the foulness of his imaginations, but the ceaseless, metallic hammering of them in his brain.
Sometimes when I write, I find myself incorporating metaphors without even thinking. This helps cut down on the amount of words I use. Hopefully, I haven't used up my quota. Reference my article (Too Many Left Turns). Why don't you grab a metaphor and come dance with me today.
Referenced: A Dictionary of Contemporary American Usage
Bergen and Cornelia Evans 1957


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But my feet are clay
Your words do delight
So perhaps tonight
A metaphor perchance
Will illumine a dance
Salud,
Oh goddess of morning metphors! This explanation is effective by the examples chosen. When the writing chips are down, Shakespeare is always a great place to go to discover how to do it right!
I hope you and Marley have a good ride in her bateau.
Laissez les bons temps rouler,
Colonel Possum
Go get em' girly. I hope you have a beautiful day!
THANKS/ Stop by soon, I have a new poem up. And all of you who are going to read this, stop by too,
thanks.
Travisty.
Thanks for the lesson! I'm still laughing at Carl's comment. OK - not much of a metaphor but this one's for Carl - "Is that pickled goat I smell or the aroma of sibling rivalry?"
I just looked out and saw no street lights on my street and a whole bunch of neighbors who went to bed early...so:
The dark night covers like a velvet cloth.
I always love the layers in things; a metaphor is not merely a figure of speech and method of writing, but we can also have a metaphor for someone's life. Not to be confused with a parable. I have always thought of "cleaning the kitchen" as my personal metaphor....
I hope I get this right, Peter dear. "An allegory is a sustained metaphor, a narrative in which the characters and actions are veiled representations of meanings implied but not stated. The best known allegories in English are the parables of the Gospels." ref: A Dictionary of Contemporary American Usage
Peter, you're funny with the "cleaning the kitchen" personal metaphor. Now, I wonder what mine is - can you guess? I need coffe now. Salud,