The Sniper Smiled
With the stars bright overhead
twinkling as pin-pricks of cold fire
in the chill of the desert night
the mud brick town
sat heavy
in the silver moonlight
and high upon a flat roof top
a soldier
lay with sniper's rifle cocked
peering
into the ink shadows
splashed across the moonlit streets
Nothing moved
but the town held its breath
until a dog barked into the stillness
like a sudden cannon shot
then barked yet again like a rippling
flurry of rifle shots
to suddenly
fall still
and the darkness
pressed down
in a silence louder
than any dog
The soldier eased the rifle up
to glue his eye
to the sniper's telescope
and with finger slowly squeezing
the first pressure of the trigger
there in the cross hairs
of the scope
a shadow moved and just
one squeeze more sent death
belching in a leaping
tongue of flame
licking the dark
The rifle shot
cleaved
the silence and resounded
in the night
even as the body slumped
into the silver light
on the street to lie
in a puff of desert dust
and all was once more
so still
that the night
dared not move
The sniper smiled at being God
to let live or snuff
with yet one more kill
but his hair stood on end
and his skin crawled
for there was a presence
watching him from behind
and he turned his head
to see her standing still
all veiled in black
measuring him with cold
starlight fire in her eyes
She held no
gun or knife
her regal face
was calm and silver
in the moonlight
but she filled the sniper
with mortal dread
as her smile
serene
clutched his heart
and slowly
squeezed
For he was a man
with a smoking gun
and ice in his soul
while she of the silver smile
was Azrael
the Angel of Death
come to claim her own
yet though the sniper died
there was not
even a pin-drop sound
in the silence crashing down
until the dog howled in fear


Comments: 30
There are so many perfect phrases and well-chosen words in this poem. I especially love " silence louder than any dog"
and "so still
that the night
dared not move".
Beautifully written.
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Question on Stanza 2, Line 4: Did you intend "canon" like the camera (snap!) or "cannon" like the ka-boom device? I'm thinking #2.
It is because neither you nor I can accurately judge the good from the bad that I believe in Thou shalt not kill, turn the other cheek, love one another and love your 'enemies.'
Thanks for picking up the literal - yes, I did mean ka-boom. I'll now rush away to correct it.
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http://www.reference.com/search?db=web&q=Azrael
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Great job!!!
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P.S. I wouldn't have a clue where to submit it.
cheers!!
And I'm not being generous, I'm being honest.
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