Love Lies Next To Me--two word challenge

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Faith H. Jun 22, 2006, 12:17pm EDT

sweet, lucky lady!

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Carol Voigts Jun 22, 2006, 12:18pm EDT

Thanks, Cathy. I'm glad to know yu end your days as I do. My favorite time!

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Pam F. Jun 22, 2006, 12:44pm EDT

THis is so sweet and refreshing that you used Lies as to lie in bed not to be disceiftul. Very good job and Congratulations! I love that time of day too!

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Sue Urquhart Jun 22, 2006, 2:48pm EDT

Hi Carol- What a beautiful poem! I love your interpretation of love lies....What a wonderful way to end each day. ( it's about time)

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Mona S. Svendsen Jun 22, 2006, 3:35pm EDT

That's what we all hope for, well done, Carol!

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Carl Neeld Jun 22, 2006, 5:23pm EDT

You done good, girl.

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Jose Wolfster M. Jun 22, 2006, 5:40pm EDT

great stuff!

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jessie voigts Jun 22, 2006, 5:53pm EDT

beautiful, carol!

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Martha Jette, Author/Editor Jun 22, 2006, 7:18pm EDT

This is a wonderfully positive take on the two-word challenge.

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Nancy S. Jun 22, 2006, 10:41pm EDT

I love this! Makes us want to count our blessings....

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Cheryl W. Jun 23, 2006, 8:20am EDT

Perfectly expressed. This is my favorite part of the day...feeling his arms wrap around me before we drift off to sleep.

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Done...cancelled...gather is not for ME Cancelled Jun 23, 2006, 8:36am EDT

I hope for this, one day. What a comforting poem, Carol.

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Granny Janny H. Jun 23, 2006, 10:34am EDT

Love lies close to you Carol. Your poem says it all. Well done!

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Mary M. Alward Jun 23, 2006, 10:35am EDT

Carol, A job well done. I enjoyed it. It's also the way my husband and I end our day.

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Clare Stella Jun 23, 2006, 11:56am EDT

This made me feel a little sad as it's not something I think I will ever have again. It was a beautiful poem which does what good poetry can do - evokes strong emotion in the reader. Thank you.

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Carol Voigts Jun 23, 2006, 3:51pm EDT

Thanks to all of you for commenting. i hope for everyone that love lies next to you some where or some time in your life.
Clare, 3 years ago, I was going through hell in a abusive (but thankfully short ) marriage and thought I'd never have this either. Keep hope and be open. (but watch out for con artists and gigelos.

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