Dying in the Snow
Winter is heavy on the bough
and frost lies chilled
upon the crackling ground
and there you lay
frozen stiff in the park
with no more songs
to sing in your heart
and the hope in your soul
all withered away.
You closed your eyes
before you died
a stranger in the snow
and I wondered whether
Death kissed you on the mouth
or on the brow
so with eyes shut
you slipped into the velvet mystery
with the faint smile
upon your lips.
On one knee beside you
I looked at the lines
of woe etched upon your face
and the grey whiskers
frozen stiff
and I thought
was it sour wine
on your last breath
or the vinegar from the spear
of those who didn't care
the taste in your mouth
as you lay dying
in your threadbare coat.
Do you have parents
still to wail upon the wind
and where are the brothers and sisters
I do not see here in the snow
nor the children you might have had
to grieve as you lie still and stiff
in the frigid air.
If I could hum or sing
your song for you
it would moan
as the wind ruffling my hair
but would not be chilled
as the air freezing
the tear rolling down my cheek
for you who died in a park
all alone but with a strange
dignity still.
You have but me
a stranger kneeling beside you
to care enough to touch
you gently on the cheek
a stranger lying
dead in the snow.


Comments: 53
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and I wondered whether
Death kissed you on the mouth
or on the brow
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a beautiful image, Magi.
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Magi
The biting cold has finally set in here in West OZ. At the moment, I'd love some summer warmth. Shortly, I'll have to turn on the gas heater - evening is fast falling as I write this. Enjoy the summer!
Magi
you gently on the cheek
a stranger lying
dead in the snow
Thank you ;)
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"you slipped into the velvet mystery
with the faint smile
upon your lips".
I bow to you.
I thought it way past time to post some of these earlier poems of mine - of late I have been spotlighting poems listed in my Haunting/Surreal Table of Contents, which contains some 53 similar works.
I remember seeing this before and yet there is no comment from me. Perhaps I wandered by and saw you kneeling and gently touching the cheek of the one unknown and did not want to intrude on a sacred moment.
I bow to you.