by donna f.
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March 6, 2006

Rapture

June 04, 2006 12:24 PM EDT
views: 35 | rating: 10/10 (3 votes) | comments: 19

"The choice is yours, my love." he whispered tenderly into her ear.  How she had longed to hear those words.

 Years of self denial were now, in an instant, dissolved, as was her will power. Her breath came on short rasps, excited, yet restrained.   

"Hot fudge, caramel pecan sundae please"

 

50 words

 

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Comments: 19

0000-twobraincells-0000 Jun 4, 2006, 12:51pm EDT
YES!!! YES!!! OH MY GOD.....YES!!!
Linda Douglas Jun 4, 2006, 12:58pm EDT
Whoa!!!! Yes!!!
donna f. Jun 4, 2006, 1:05pm EDT
Thanks y'all
La Lady Lisa Westerfield Jun 4, 2006, 1:19pm EDT
Hot fudge.
donna f. Jun 4, 2006, 1:29pm EDT
Notice the only comments here are from women...hmmmm......and thanks, Lisa.
Carl Neeld Jun 4, 2006, 2:24pm EDT
You done good, girl. I'll be grinning the remainder of the day.
donna f. Jun 4, 2006, 4:14pm EDT
Carl, Glad to see I brought a grin to face.
Kari and Cindy, heaven it is.
Thanks to all
Martha Jette, Author/Editor Jun 5, 2006, 6:52pm EDT
Mmmm.... better than sex? Boy, I must be getting old!
Bonnie L. Jun 5, 2006, 6:58pm EDT
No Martha - nothing is better than sex!

But this was great Donna ... You got me with that sweet twist at the end!

I'm smiling!
donna f. Jun 5, 2006, 7:00pm EDT
NOw where'd y'all get the idea i think chocolate is better than sex. Not THIS gal. Thanks Bonnie and Martha.
Deborah W. Jun 5, 2006, 7:14pm EDT
LOL I love it! I was just talking about getting something sweet! Oh this is just priceless!
Charles Lennox Jun 5, 2006, 7:25pm EDT
Rapture, that sounds like it could be the name of an ice cream concoction of some sort.
donna f. Jun 5, 2006, 7:31pm EDT
Deborah, Go nuts, hon

Charles, Got Ben & Jerry's number?
Bill's Spirit Jun 12, 2006, 8:43am EDT
One of your best fifty-worders, Donna.

I love the way you juxtaposed the days events. (wink-wink)
donna f. Jun 12, 2006, 8:45am EDT
BIll, Thanks, Hon.
HGM Moya Goatley Jun 19, 2006, 1:52pm EDT
Grins! This one really touches the spot. Moya
donna f. Jul 12, 2006, 7:24am EDT
Doesn't it though...

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