Twinned

Twinned

Heaven here

stars serene

moon mellow

sun shining

eagle eddying

hawk hovering

bee buzzing

spiders spinning

clouds castle

storm scowls

snowflakes swirl

sleet sluice

frost freezing

icicle icing

rainbow radiant

mountain mist

volcano vomit

valley vapour

creek chortles

river runs

lake limpid

pond placid

marsh methane

sea seething

ocean outrage

dolphin diving

whale wallowing

ship solitary

time travelling

forest full

dinosaurs dead

blowflies busy

trees tumbling

farms fallow

cows chewing

wheat waving

hamlet humble

village venerable

town teasing

city complaining

railway rumbling

cars coughing

jets jousting

God gracious

wind whispering

me musing

words weaving

you yawning

we wending

us uniting

our own

Comments: 19

Sandy (Site Psychic™) Knauer May 29, 2006, 10:36pm EDT

You deserve a ten for formatting! I'm impressed. Oh, I also like the poem.

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anna g. vanwinkle May 30, 2006, 12:29am EDT

i got dizzy (vertigo) but I loved this.

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again May 30, 2006, 3:32am EDT

Sandy, the formatting was impossible to get exactly right on Gather. But I'm glad you liked the poem.

Magi

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again May 30, 2006, 3:34am EDT

Anna, thank you. The tumbling words and images made even me a little giddy.

Magi

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Edward Nudelman May 30, 2006, 12:29pm EDT

very nice, worth a ten for eagle eddying...!

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David Butler May 30, 2006, 5:43pm EDT

I like this one very much. Great work.
David Lars

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again May 30, 2006, 8:43pm EDT

Thank you Edward - wait till I get the eagle doing cartwheels.

Magi

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again May 30, 2006, 8:45pm EDT

Thank you, too, David. I'm trying - very trying.

Magi

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Stephen Schneider May 30, 2006, 9:10pm EDT

I liked "eagle eddying" also

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again May 30, 2006, 9:41pm EDT

Thanks Stephen - I'm glad you liked it.

Magi

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Bonnie L. May 30, 2006, 9:46pm EDT

Incredible Magi - this took me through a myriad of emotions and experiences! And I loved the visual affects of the cascading words.

...but "volcano vomit"? -- at least you didn't say "puke", LOL!

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again May 30, 2006, 11:42pm EDT

Thanks Bonnie! I also decided against volcano spew.

Magi

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manoj sanyal May 31, 2006, 12:10am EDT

The poem and the shape... both excellent.

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again May 31, 2006, 12:47am EDT

Thank you Manoj - it was a challenge to do.

Magi

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again Jun 3, 2006, 3:57am EDT

Why, thank you very much indeed, Cindy. Believe me, it wasn't easy.

Magi

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Renda B~surviving the storm by dancing in the rain. Oct 6, 2008, 2:59pm EDT

I feel as if I'm spinning from your words and the images they produced! Great writing :)

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again Oct 6, 2008, 7:56pm EDT

A bit like a spinning and tumbling leaf, perhaps, Renda. I'm pleased that you enjoyed this nature poetry of mine. Thank you very much.

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elizabeth e. Oct 6, 2008, 10:03pm EDT

What formatting, magi...and yes, the words were tumbling and twirling as I read.

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again Oct 7, 2008, 6:16am EDT

The formating has to do with the line indentation ... but by and large, Bob, it worked.

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