Comic Erotic poetry------Secret Rendezvous

What a pretty site
after a long drive
All week long
she had been anticipating
tryst with her lover

Her husband had left town,
So she was here
Looking ahead
At her love nest
Waiting for her lover

Quaint little cottage
amidst the countryside
Belonged to her
husband was unaware

She undressed slowly,
climbed the four poster
Disarrayed she lay there
impatient for him

Finally it was over
She heard his car,
closing her eyes
Got under the covers

He climbed up the stairs
opened the bedroom door
Taking off his clothes
Got in there with her

Slowly touching her
Slowly biting her
His hands all over
His lips exploring

She went wild
Her moans said as much
He was on the edge
Trying to slowdown

He tightened his hold
Heightening her senses
Both lost control
Going over the edge

Cresendo!
Crash!

The old four-poster
Couldn't take it anymore
Quite suddenly
it gave up under
their resonating rhythm

Instead of a
love-filled weekend,
Both were in hospital
with broken limbs
shattered egos!

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Next part follows….

What happens after hubby returns?

Come after a break!

Comments: 14

Mark Jepsen May 24, 2006, 4:45pm EDT

I couldn't resist the title... now I can't wait for part II!

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John Doyle May 24, 2006, 4:59pm EDT

Very good

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Madame Donna C. May 24, 2006, 5:17pm EDT

gautami, this was clever, funny and I can't wait to read more.

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Cat Givens May 24, 2006, 7:31pm EDT

Oh, Gautami, you've got me! Very clever twist, which really shows what can happen, eh? I'm looking forward to your next.

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MHN Paree May 25, 2006, 2:22am EDT

Nice twist in the tale!

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gautami tripathy May 25, 2006, 3:35am EDT

Thanks folks! Part 2 will come! Wait a while!

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0000-tobiah-0000 May 25, 2006, 4:46pm EDT

hahahahaha oh so tragic and oh so pittyfull. How pathetic is that? You my friend are a master!

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Stephen Schneider May 25, 2006, 4:54pm EDT

Funny piece

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Max Babi May 27, 2006, 4:26am EDT

Good one...yes, waiting for the part 2 !

cheerz!

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gautami tripathy May 28, 2006, 4:35am EDT

LOL! Thanks Tobiah, Stephen and Max.

Part 2 will be posted soon, as promised!

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Bonnie L. May 28, 2006, 4:38am EDT

OMG gautami! Guess now you had to be laughing at my message about off-color talk, LOL! But seriously this was so good, and had me going pretty good until the "Cresendo! Crash!"...Love that part!

You are wonderful!

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