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Comments: 16

John Doyle May 24, 2006, 2:55pm EDT

East meets west. Very good

Mark Jepsen May 24, 2006, 3:55pm EDT

I always figured that I was trapped in an ambush by our culture of nihilistic expediency... guess I was right.

manoj sanyal May 25, 2006, 3:11am EDT

nice combo pack.

gautami tripathy May 25, 2006, 3:24am EDT

Thanks John, Heather and Manojda.

gautami tripathy May 25, 2006, 3:25am EDT

Yes Mark, I have always felt that way. The big question is why?

gautami tripathy May 25, 2006, 3:27am EDT

Thanks Cindy. Poetry for most of us is very personal. I ask all my questions this way. Some get answered, some get lost. But my quest never ends....

Stephen Schneider May 25, 2006, 9:09am EDT

Nice piece

Ludie Gee May 25, 2006, 1:47pm EDT

Opposites attract!

Bonnie L. May 26, 2006, 11:45am EDT

Very well done gautami! Though this speaks of more of a personal rather than a political statement to me.

gautami tripathy May 28, 2006, 4:39am EDT

Thanks Stephen And Bonnie.
It is a personal statement.

Ludolf, I agree, opposites attract but this?

Annabelle Marie Sharkie May 28, 2006, 11:47am EDT

I love this. Opposites often do attract. I think it's an unconscious attempt at balance. Too bad it usually doesn't work out that way.

gautami tripathy May 30, 2006, 3:45am EDT

Yes, it doesn't work this way. But then thats what life is all about.

Mariana T. May 31, 2006, 1:01am EDT

this poem is very deep &
though I don't exactly know what it means, I like the fact that
it makes me think.

Onan Lovejoy Jun 2, 2006, 12:04pm EDT

This is the kind of thing I could turn over in my head all day. I'll be thinking about this for awhile.