by manoj sanyal

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May 5, 2006

Fantasized feel (haiku)

May 23, 2006 07:48 AM EDT (Updated: May 24, 2006 12:37 AM EDT)

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Version 1

Your nail thrown in sky

grinning like eclipsed moon,

winking me, aha!

Version 2

You cut nail and throw.

That glows in sky as Id moon.

My passion grows… umm.

Tags: random musing, haiku, poems, free write, life, love, poem, poetry, poetic expression, writing, short musings

To Groups: Amusing Musings, Poetry, Free Thinking, haiku, Poetically Incorrect, Poetic expressions, Love, originalpoetryaspirants

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Aileen F. May 23, 2006, 3:04pm EDT

A very playful image!

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manoj sanyal May 24, 2006, 5:27am EDT

Thanks maureen, Aileen and Cindy for appreciation of this playful haiku.
Have nice time.

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jessie voigts May 25, 2006, 10:52am EDT

it is playful! such fun. i love reading haiku!

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manoj sanyal May 25, 2006, 12:36pm EDT

Thanks jessie!
Enjoy your time.

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Barbary Chaapel May 25, 2006, 3:38pm EDT

Manoj,

I think each version is quite different, one winking, one passion.

Don't tell me that icon baby is you!? (Smile)

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manoj sanyal May 26, 2006, 12:12am EDT

Dear Barbary,.... you are very correct...

The icon baby is not exactly me .... but the child in me ...(smiles)

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