by manoj sanyal

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May 5, 2006

Separation (Bakers Dozen)

May 23, 2006 05:05 AM EDT (Updated: May 28, 2006 01:38 AM EDT)

views: 24 | rating: 10/10 (2 votes) | comments: 6

She seated in park.

Vacant exchange; he proceeded.

Tears wiped.

Time elapsed.

Tags: random musing, free write, prose-poetry, void magazine, bakers dozen, expression of thoughts, poetic expression, short musings, writing

To Groups: Free Thinking, Poetically Incorrect, Poetic expressions

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Comments: 6

Spencer T. May 23, 2006, 6:20am EDT

See layers within. Nice stuff.

0000-moonshy-0000 May 23, 2006, 6:35am EDT

So short but finished yet still gripping!

manoj sanyal May 24, 2006, 5:28am EDT

Thanks dear Spencer and Sandra for reading and for appreciative comments.

Gisela S. May 26, 2006, 3:17pm EDT

I've read this three times, and after each a different accompanying mental story appeared. So compelling! It really prompts the imagination.

manoj sanyal May 27, 2006, 1:19am EDT

Thanks Cindy and Gisela.
Yes ... Various plots can be thought of ... upto the imagination of readers.
Best wishes.


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