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Son

May 21, 2006 12:04 PM EDT

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Aidan, son of mine,

You make me laugh, no, really,

I am serious.

Tags: family, musings, laughter, love, children, relationships

To Groups: haiku, Love

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Comments: 6

Nancy S. May 21, 2006, 12:43pm EDT

I love it! How can you say so much, and imply even more, in such a short poem?????

Stephen Schneider May 21, 2006, 1:05pm EDT

I agree with Nancy. Then I almost always do

lisa marchal May 21, 2006, 1:26pm EDT

I agree... so much said with so few words... wonderful poem... loved it

HGM Moya Goatley May 21, 2006, 1:37pm EDT

Thank you Nancy and Stephen. I'm pleased you like it. Moya

Ludie Gee May 22, 2006, 1:59pm EDT

Short meaningful to the point humourous loving - simply wonderful


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