by gautami tripathy
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May 2, 2006

Another version of cinquains----Love

May 16, 2006 02:38 PM EDT
views: 6 | comments: 3
Third version of Cinquains

The structure is as follows:

1 noun

2 adjectives

3 –ing verbs

1 complete sentence

1 proper noun



Love
desirable,passionate,
craving,burning,yearning,
only for you.
kindred?
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Comments: 3

Bonnie L. May 16, 2006, 2:42pm EDT
Wow gautami.....That is beautiful! Thanks for sharing this third version of cinquain that I had not seen. But now you have me back at square one. I think Eric L.'s comment on my article said it best, how cinquain is the perfect blend of right and left brain. The emotions are there, but getting them to fit within the correct sequence is the challenge!

Great job!
gautami tripathy May 17, 2006, 6:18am EDT
Thanks Bonnie, Eric is right. Thinking of a perfect cinquain does involve both the part of the brain. There might be more versions. I am exploring all!

Thanks Cindy, I find the syllable counting one harder. I can write the other two rather well. The problem is syllable countings are different in US and UK English. Hence I am not always sure as I use the British way.

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