by Carol Voigts
Member since:
November 16, 2005

Wedded Lunacy --Two Word Challenge (another limerick verse)

April 03, 2006 05:30 PM EDT (Updated: April 15, 2006 01:55 PM EDT)
views: 12 | comments: 15

on this verse strum on the autoharp.  It will make it sound like the waves.

 

A TUNA WHO LIVED IN THE OPEN SEA

WAS COURTED ONE SPRING BY A TURNABEE

THOUGH HIS MOTHER CALLED HIM LUNA

BEETLE'S MOM CALLED HER TUNA

SO BY THE SHORE TUNA WEDDED LUNA, (SEE)CY?

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Comments: 15

Chris Burnett Apr 3, 2006, 6:37pm EDT
I laughed out loud on this one, very cute and fun. Chris Burnett
Dawn Matley Maselli Apr 3, 2006, 7:23pm EDT
Carol, very funny!! Love the playfulness!
Edward Nudelman Apr 3, 2006, 9:14pm EDT
Oh my gosh, that's complex.. and cute
Tony Close Apr 3, 2006, 9:45pm EDT
Funny, clever and cute! Nicely done.
0000-doublel-0000 Apr 3, 2006, 10:05pm EDT
This was very cute and creative, Carol!
jessie voigts Apr 3, 2006, 10:09pm EDT
too funny!
lisa marchal Apr 3, 2006, 10:18pm EDT
two laughs within minutes...you have me on a roll.. thanks
J. Johannes Apr 4, 2006, 1:17pm EDT
great way to play with the words!
George Corneliussen Apr 4, 2006, 1:38pm EDT
Carol,
Are you old enough to remember the old Burma Shave signs ? If they still existed your poem would be on a set of them.
Carol Voigts Apr 4, 2006, 7:13pm EDT
Thanks, all. And yes, George, I surely remember the Burmashave. however how could you strum on the autoharp while driving the car?
George Corneliussen Apr 5, 2006, 6:10am EDT
Carol,
No problem. Any cell phone-talking, Starbucks-drinking, driver could teach you. Just try not to mow the signs down as you talk on your cell phone and drink Starbucks, as you strum on your autoharp.
John F Walter Apr 9, 2006, 9:29pm EDT
This was childlike, amusing, and downright cute!
Richard Harrison Jun 11, 2006, 8:51pm EDT
Fine limerick! I invite you to visit www.limerickcontests.com and compose a couple of entries for the June contest - subject Pets, any creature from poodles to pachyderms you can fit into five lines. And this invitation is to ALL Gather writers - When you enter from the website, type GATHER in the subject line and you get one free entry with each paid entry. You may walk away with CASH!

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