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Northern Temperate Haiku- The Four Part Year

April 03, 2006 10:29 AM EDT (Updated: April 03, 2006 10:44 AM EDT)

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Tiny little trout brook
A miniature Grand Canyon
A sea in my yard

Hot newly cut hay
Clover and honeysuckle
Scenting the hot wind

Blaze rainbow colors
Crisply, coolly, burning sun
Ising glass puddles

Quietly swirling
A nearly soundless rushing
Tight freezing warmness<div id="stickies-count" style="">0</div>

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Dan Merritt Apr 3, 2006, 10:45am EDT

I am VERY annoyed by the stupid 'tags' the editor keeps putting in here!

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Dan Merritt Apr 3, 2006, 10:46am EDT

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Dan Merritt Apr 3, 2006, 10:47am EDT

The comments actually format better than the main article. I am very annoyed.

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Edward Nudelman Apr 3, 2006, 9:28pm EDT

This is very nice, Dan. Yes, that's so annoying. All I can figure is, when you edit, you need to then hit "next" vs. preview. I like the last line very much.

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