It holds my thoughts
My hopes, my fears
with vivid dreams
and certain tears
Bearing the words
we spoke as one
Carrying the prayers
that had been sung
Across the seas
it drifted true
This bottled promise
I send to you
Ok, I don't generally do poetry but I gave it a try anyways. This is in answer to the bottled promise challenge.
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Another great take on the words. Such few words with such deep meaning. That takes a good deal of skill. Simply beautiful, Amigo.
Monica, yes this is fun! :) Bottled promises just sounds poetic otherwise I would have gone with a narrative instead.