Tag: critique
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September 15, 2008 02:45 PM EDT --
Going Out
It always felt the same-a weird floaty feeling, pushing through space, and then coming to a sudden forward stop. When . . .
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June 28, 2007 01:53 PM EDT --
(damn, that sounds like a great title of a book)
Anyway ... little joe-joe, cousin Nay-Nay and Mama Francine absolutely, positively cannot give you the review you need to improve your craft. Critique, . . .
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June 18, 2009 10:45 PM EDT --
Hurt (triolet)
Creating a world of hurt, to leave when it's your choice. So good at making one feel like dirt, creating a world of hurt, all in one hate-filled spurt. Speaking in bitter . . .
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August 05, 2009 03:06 PM EDT --
When Honest Poetry Critique began, I remember that many of the members said that they would love to be able to critique but didn't know how, didn't even know where to begin. The amount of critique being . . .
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November 18, 2008 05:14 PM EST --
Today was bittersweet. We ended our fall semester for critique class, until February. It's nice to take a break but I will miss the creative minds of my class. Genius comes in many different forms. . . .
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December 05, 2006 05:06 PM EST --
Into your chest I reach
My two hands heart seeks
And softly wrap
Hot breath
A little tender rubbing
Squeeze
Release
In close embrace I hold you
To feel your pump and beat
Your . . .
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May 20, 2007 10:51 PM EDT --
Critiques appreciated. Thanks!
I realize that my readers may not have read Gloria Anzaldua's book or the snippet of that book. I hope that my reflection of her essay does not confuse you. This . . .
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March 24, 2009 08:56 AM EDT --
For Saturday's WE workshop, dropping into the amazing painting of CC Miranda.
His tortoise-like pace slowed even more as he neared the pink house. He held his breath briefly, . . .
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August 22, 2009 05:41 PM EDT --
Honest Poetry Critique is proud to present the Iron Poet competition!
Rules:
Each participant will submit three poems to this article, in the style and on the topic of their choosing. No poem will . . .
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July 10, 2009 02:10 PM EDT --
Be respectful . Everyone who posts here has been courageous enough to ask for criticism. They are serious about their poetry and concerned for their growth. That in itself sets our members apart from . . .
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July 26, 2007 03:57 PM EDT --
Is there a Gather rule, rhyme, or reason about when and how to critique another writer’s articles? As a new and fairly active Gatherer, I get immediate notification of articles published in many . . .
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May 08, 2009 05:33 PM EDT --
The sun pulls the scent
from the leaves and
sticks and
bushes of herbs dried crisp
in the Maquis
Insects and
lizards scuttle from holes
searching for the
hot shade
of my body
I stand
soundless . . .
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March 17, 2006 06:28 PM EST --
Several years ago, the doctor had me take a week off from work. "Don't use your arms at all", he said. "You need complete rest at first. Then we'll start you on some . . .
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September 01, 2006 05:41 PM EDT --
Thanks to all who offered criticisms last night. They were all to the point and valuable. Here's a second pass.
Food Porn
I walked in the front door and confronted a huge bowl of paella. . . .
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December 04, 2006 10:55 PM EST --
I wrote this little piece for the benefit of my editing/coaching clients who were beginning the daunting task of sending out manuscripts for publication. I thought there might be readers . . .
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February 16, 2007 07:49 PM EST --
Critique is always welcomed - Marilyn
I could feel the tension in the air. Everytime my brother and his wife were in the same room together, it happened. We all held our collective breath, waiting . . .
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May 23, 2007 03:23 AM EDT --
Baby
Baby,
cuddly, innocent,
giggling, smiling, crying
We are finally parents.
Complete.
mn - 2007
This is only my second attempt at a cinquain - please feel free to critique. ~ Marilyn
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March 20, 2008 02:15 AM EDT --
sestina
Money for Nothing in Sugarville, Tennessee
On my left hand, I wear a diamond ring,
A gift from my old man, he calls me his sugar.
On my right hand, I wear nothing.
Today the skies . . .
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March 12, 2009 08:08 AM EDT --
I sincerely wish to have everyone's critique on these poems. How is the subject received? How do they make you feel? How is the style? Help me learn correct punctuation. I take everything into . . .
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August 04, 2009 12:11 AM EDT --
Yes, I'm bored. Deal with it.
In the interest of greasing the creative wheels-- and frankly, to kill some time-- Honest Poetry Critique is proud to present the SHORT FORM POETRY DUEL!!
(Yes, . . .
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